Part 1 of Essay
I think that if kids spent their time outside rather than watching TV there would be less kids in gangs and less kids causing crimes. I've noticed lately that alot of kids are in gangs and have been burglarizing houses and stores. One reason why I think kids are becoming more violent and committing crimes is because, they ....

Part 2 of Essay
.... if every body went outdoors instead of watching TV. Just think, what if kids spent their time outside rather than watching TV and learning how to steal and kill. Maybe our world would become a safer place. Instead of watching TV, I spend my time outside. It is allot more fun then learning how to fight and kill each other. ....