Part 1 of Essay
After hearing the results of are grammar retest, I was stunned to here why so many people had failed a retest. Usually, every time the teacher gives a retest, the marks are usually high. The first test done was( I think ) hard. The first test, I studied for about 1 hour and after that I thought that I would score high on ....

Part 2 of Essay
.... the results of my test (and most people) were inadequate. I feel that I should have studied much more. I reviewed the test and added up how many mistakes I had and in which areas I had difficulty. It turns out, that most of my mistakes came on verbs. I come to a conclusion that the test I took was not studied hard enough for and next time to spend more time studying. ....